Haiku

Hello! I wrote another couple of haikus today. As always, general thoughts or suggestions for improvement much appreciated x

First rays on dew-drops
Reveal secret passages,
Surface to surface.
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Tiny bodies sleep,
Silent under evergreens;
Needles Glittering.

First attempt at Haiku...

Misty morning scenes.

Trees ablaze and raining flames,

Trace scents of Winter.