Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

Sunday, 2 October 2011

Poem...

I wrote this awhile ago after a row with someone really close to me... any general thoughts or suggestions for improvement very welcome x

Insignificant Things

My heart feels frozen; I check my breathing
It’s nothing much; I am only leaving.
Your movement’s miles to each painful step-
So I pause, and stay carefully still.

We admit defeat so quickly
So hastily, rudely retreat.
What comfort now do you think you’ll bring me?
Just ease fleeting, insignificant things.